The characters were not very descriptive and neither were the scenes. It was like "he went to the ice cream stand" most authors describe the smells, the appearance of the ice cream stand, the way the character (who we are supposed to believe is "so hot"') walk, his talk, his outfit. This book did none of the above, and the sex scenes were like this as well. Its hard to connect with an audience without descriptions. The plot was non existent, emotions and actions were not explained, just done. It was very hard to be pulled into the fantasy, which isn't that the reason we loved twilight in the first place? Reading in the first place? This book was based on Edward and Bella. But It was obvious Stephanie Meyer didn't write this book.